Making our stories interesting

We are learning how to make our stories more interesting.
I found it tricky because the images were hard to find. Next time I would like to do this but put more images on to it. I like these interesting story starters because it makes it more interesting.

Looking over the edge ocean, I saw this really scary dark cave.
I ask my mum if I can see what is in there, But mum said “No you can’t you might get lost in there".
Mum said "stop that stomping now"!.I started to mimic her.I was stomping to the car. Then suddenly I heard this sound coming from the hills. It felt like an earthquake. And it does sound like an huge thing, I was getting scared. But I was still looking up on the hill. And it was an volcano explosion!.It told mum “to hurry up and get in to the car before it catches up to us”. She left everything on the sand, she got in the car and started the car and started to drive off.the lava almost hit us. Mum went fast as I almost hit myself on the passenger seat. And then we were close to home. Mum said “ were home now. I said to mum “ can we never go to that beach ever again.